Change: If you do directly change the text, please leave an editing note so that we can identify changes more easily.The main difference is cosmetic. The New Version has an improved language and structure, the Old version is ill written and reptetitive, but the ideas are basically the same. adam   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 102)

Change: You should all have had the draft chapters by email. And you are very welcome to mail yoru overall comments seperately. We've put up this wiki as an experiment : it'll give you a possibility to insert your direct comments on text in one place. Hope it works. As   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 122)